Monday, 6 August 2018

Catching an eel by Shannon and Flynn

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Shannon
    This is a great piece of writing co- written by your and Flynn. It sounds like you both enjoyed your eel fishing experience. Well done for writing this in the third person like you are watching what is happening rather than being the characters yourself. This can be tricky at times.

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